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09-09-2022 03:34 PM - edited 09-09-2022 03:36 PM
09-09-2022 03:34 PM - edited 09-09-2022 03:36 PM
Re: Writing poetry thread
nUcLeUs
With what do I
When All that is
Truth and time
Are sure to become lie
Could I have been
That who you could need
When it's me whom
You believe to be
Against your grain
I know that you are not
completely f★cking insane
Psychological Warfare
Creates Chronic Fatigue
Expectation causes
stress to a growing seed
Since I can remember
I only ever wanted to
breath
To live and be recognised
as a nucleus with needs
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09-09-2022 05:12 PM
09-09-2022 05:12 PM
Re: Writing poetry thread
Thankyou so much @TuxedoCat it's lovely to read your feedback.
That is a great question too. In some ways I guess it's like looking back on a distant, stranger. I can see & vaguely remember the pain I was going through. I love how much I've grown.
In another way, it's like I wrote these only yesterday! And I feel closer to that distant stranger than I ever have.
(It's also embarrassing/shameful to look back on, & then share on here! Maybe, like seeing old photos of yourself, that you wish you could hide. I don't know, some parts impressed me, like I had assumed my past self was all messed up & confused, but I can see I had some great insight at twenty something, even if I was extremely confused. I guess I have maybe been enlightened, that my past self deserves more credit than I have been giving them!)
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09-09-2022 05:30 PM
09-09-2022 05:30 PM
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Thankyou for your comments & question @TuxedoCat this is really cool for me xx
I like that you said it resonated with you. It's good, occasionally to remember who we are, where we came from. Is this what you meant?
I have blocked most of past out. I don't need to relive pain. Possibly, consequently my brain is extremely "now" focused. I have trouble thinking about yesterday, or 5 mins ago. I rarely think of my past.
I think this might have been good for me, to find these today.
Thankyou xx
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12-09-2022 06:24 PM
12-09-2022 06:24 PM
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It sounds like it's been a really positive experience to find the poetry and reconnect with parts of it @maddison ❤️ Thank you so much for sharing how you've been feeling about it too
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18-09-2022 01:06 AM
18-09-2022 01:06 AM
Re: Writing poetry thread
(When I'm blue about poverty holding me back and peoples narrow opinions on poor people I re-read this)
In Hungry Desperation
A plight of despair I'm in feeling like I never win,
though gamble, I do not,
I do seem to lose a lot!
Hunger dose burn a deep hole,
'the way of life' so I'm told, but surrender to such a fate, I cannot!
My determination is all I've got.
EjR 2015
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14-11-2022 03:38 PM
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21-05-2023 02:04 AM - edited 21-05-2023 02:06 AM
21-05-2023 02:04 AM - edited 21-05-2023 02:06 AM
Re: Writing poetry thread
Being a peasant,
Used to be pleasant,
Because nobody cared about you.
Now they all stare,
And suddenly care,
Because now you know more than they do.
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